My blurb for the new clinic brochure:
It’s supposed to be 40 words or less. This is 44 words. Oh well!
For over 10 years, Sarah B has used her Masters degree in Expressive Arts Therapy to facilitate self-understanding and healing by means of art, writing, movement and psychodrama. She has worked successfully with individuals and with groups of teenagers and adults.
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For over 10 years, Sarah B, who holds a Masters degree in Expressive Arts Therapy, has facilitated self-understanding and healing via art, writing, movement and psychodrama. She has worked successfully with individuals and with groups of teenagers and adults.
38, but with more of a marketing bent (you wanna get the word "successfully" in the first sentence, and use active not passive forms of verbs! :->)
With 10+ years experience and a Masters in Expressive Arts Therapy, Sarah B successfully facilitates self-understaning and healing. Sarah B specializes in treatment of teenagers and adults using art, writing, movement, and psychodrama. Group or individual treatment available.
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